{"id":6975,"date":"2020-08-23T14:01:29","date_gmt":"2020-08-23T19:01:29","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/utopianediting.com\/?p=6975"},"modified":"2022-01-01T18:19:37","modified_gmt":"2022-01-02T00:19:37","slug":"working-through-developmental-feedback","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/utopianediting.com\/index.php\/2020\/08\/23\/working-through-developmental-feedback\/","title":{"rendered":"Working through Developmental Feedback"},"content":{"rendered":"[vc_row][vc_column width=&#8221;1\/6&#8243;][\/vc_column][vc_column width=&#8221;2\/3&#8243;][vc_column_text]\r\n<p>Developmental editing takes many forms. If you\u2019re still in the planning stage, for example, you and your editor might be going back and forth on plot lines and character arcs.<\/p>\r\n\r\n<p>But if you delivered a completed manuscript to your editor, odds are that you\u2019ve received feedback in two different forms: <strong><span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-red-color\">comments in the margin of the manuscript<\/span><\/strong> and an <strong><span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-green-cyan-color\">editorial letter<\/span><\/strong>.<\/p>\r\n\r\n<p>These two methods of feedback are both important.<\/p>\r\n\r\n<p><strong><span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-red-color\">Comments in the margin: <\/span><\/strong>When I (the editor) read your book, I want to capture my thoughts as I go, so I write questions and suggestions in the margin. These are valuable primarily for smaller issues or to remind myself of larger issues I want to address. It also puts the feedback right where you need to see it while you\u2019re revising.<\/p>\r\n\r\n<p><strong><span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-green-cyan-color\">Editorial letter:<\/span> <\/strong>However, some things are communicated more effectively in a letter. These include, but are not limited to, the following:<\/p>\r\n\r\n[\/vc_column_text][vc_column_text]\r\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\r\n<li style=\"list-style-type: none;\">\r\n<ul>\r\n<li style=\"list-style-type: none;\">\r\n<ul>\r\n<li>Praise for things you\u2019re doing well overall<\/li>\r\n<li>Suggestions for the overall plot or character development<\/li>\r\n<li>Workshop-type issues, like \u201cshow, don\u2019t tell\u201d and action beats vs. dialogue tags<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n[\/vc_column_text][vc_column_text]\r\n<p>Some people get overwhelmed with editorial feedback and have a hard time figuring out where to start. Here is how I would do it, but you can certainly do whatever works for you (for simplicity, I\u2019ve worded this as though I\u2019m your editor\u2014which I hope is true!):<\/p>\r\n<!-- \/wp:post-content -->\r\n\r\n<!-- wp:list {\"ordered\":true,\"type\":\"1\"} -->\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">1. Read through the <strong><span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-green-cyan-color\">letter<\/span><\/strong>. Any time you have an opinion, thought, question or idea related to something I suggested, <strong>leave a comment in the margin<\/strong>.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">2. Read through the <strong><span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-red-color\">manuscript comments<\/span><\/strong>. When you want to respond to one of my comments, <strong>click the \u201creply\u201d button<\/strong> at the bottom of the comment box. That way, your replies are right there with the original comment.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">3. Walk away from it for a day or two to let everything percolate.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">4. Skim through everything again and see if anything new comes to mind.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">5. List any questions you have and send them to me with the documents that now include your comments\/replies. That way, I can answer your questions and give you additional feedback on your ideas. We can also have a live chat if you think that would be helpful.<\/p>\r\n<p style=\"padding-left: 40px;\">6. If you need help starting with the revisions, I can help you make a revision calendar and keep you accountable for meeting revision deadlines. I can also provide you with some writing prompts to get you started on the most important new material.<\/p>\r\n<!-- \/wp:list -->\r\n<p><!-- wp:paragraph -->If you have more questions about working with editorial feedback, please leave a comment below! If you need help working with tracked changes (for line editing, copyediting, or proofreading), then check out my <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/utopianediting.com\/index.php\/2018\/08\/20\/intro-to-tracked-changes\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Intro to Tracked Changes<\/a><\/strong>.<\/p>\r\n<!-- \/wp:paragraph -->\r\n<p><!-- wp:paragraph --><em>Utopian Editing provides editing services from concept through proofreading.<\/em>\u00a0<strong><a href=\"https:\/\/utopianediting.com\/index.php\/contact-us\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Click here to request a free sample edit and quote.<\/a><\/strong><\/p>\r\n<!-- \/wp:paragraph -->\r\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\r\n[\/vc_column_text][\/vc_column][vc_column width=&#8221;1\/6&#8243;][\/vc_column][\/vc_row]","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>If you delivered a completed manuscript to your editor, odds are that you\u2019ve received feedback in two different forms: comments in the margin of the manuscript and an editorial letter. 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